Build You Up (30 days of poetry: day 9)

 

Prompt: 9) Solidity

A foundation is what keeps you standing,
It all depends on its solidity.
What materials you used to build you up,
What tools you broke and improvised,
What ratio of cement and sand you mixed,
How many nights did you go roofless?
It's all about how you build you up,
And the solidity of your foundation.

Author’s thoughts

At my wit’s end on what to write on this prompt, I had to resort to cliched building metaphors. ‘Build you up’ is not something I’m very proud of. It doesn’t need much explanation so I’ll not go into further details about it. Don’t get me wrong, there was nothing wrong with the prompt, yet the word seemed too foreign to my poetic vocabulary. It again reminded me that I have a lot to learn and a long way to write to. My poetic prowess is still under construction and in that way, this poem fits in personally with me. Even so, I believe that it could be a lot better and I couldn’t really do much justice to this prompt.


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This prompt is given by Ishita Dutta.

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